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posted by [personal profile] the_dala at 11:28pm on 20/04/2005 under
I don't write Jack/Elizabeth. I enjoy them both in the context of poly relationships, and I'll read J/E fics from authors I like, but I've never felt an interest in writing that particular pairing on its own.

Um. Well. Then there was this...thing.

Somewhat inspired by "Her Best Friend's Bottom" and "So, for example, I can visit your Sydney, or your Melbourne, but not your bush." Also operating on the deleted scenes version of the island scene, which does not imply that Elizabeth came up with the idea of burning the rum the second Jack popped out the rum.

Oh, and named after a Ryan Adams song. Again. It was almost "Touch, Feel & Lose," but I'm saving that for some future angsty Sparrington.

Also, this icon? Fantastic.



Rescue Blues


She thought he would be out cold after that last impressive guzzle, so she jumps when a touch startles her from a brooding contemplation of the night-black sea.

“Mmphm,” says Jack, his fingers clenching on her calf as he pulls himself up. His eyes are somewhat clearer, as though his brief nap neutralized some of the alcohol coursing through his blood. Once he is upright, his hand relaxes but remains where it lies. Elizabeth drags her eyebrows up.

Jack notices her silent disapproval and shrugs. “Jus’ your leg,” he offers, patting her as if to confirm this. “Not e’en the good part o’ the leg, mind.”

She uncurls the leg in question, stretching it out next to his, unsurprised that his hand follows. “You are not allowed to touch me there, sir.”

“Am I not?” He frowns, looking genuinely concerned. “What if your upper half was bein’ attacked by a wild boar an’ I had t’ haul you safely away by your legs? What then?”

Elizabeth snorts. “In the unlikely event of a boar attack, I suppose that would be acceptable.”

“But not now, eh?” he asks sadly, thumb moving in slow, lazy circles.

“No,” she says sharply, bending her knee. He pulls his hand up just as she jerks away.

Jack leans forward, swaying on his knees, before he manages to sit back on his heels. “So,” he says, peering down at her, “I’m not t’ touch your leg, nor – here.” His arm goes around her, not as tightly as before but just as overly familiar. Her spine goes perfectly straight and Jack chuckles, withdrawing.

Elizabeth glares at him, planting her fists in the sand. Jack cocks his head and runs his tar-stained fingertips over the back of her palm, making her clench her teeth to keep from flinching away. She mustn’t let him know how his touch offends her; it will only encourage him. “But your hand – surely there’s no harm in taking a lady’s hand?”

“Well,” she says uncertainly, pursing her lips as his fingers wind a neat circle around her wrist. “Under the circumstances...”

Under any circumstances he is a pirate and a brigand. And under any circumstances she would be expected to act the maiden, to demand he exercise whatever neglected sense of honor he might still possess.

Except under the current circumstances it hardly matters, since they’re likely to die on this island within a fortnight. Will probably doesn't have half so long. Even if, by some hazy miracle, a rescue arrives for the two of them, Jack will hang and Elizabeth will be forever tainted whether or not she deserves it.

She stops to wonder at herself, so quick to put his life on a level with her reputation. Suddenly she feels uneasy in her own company. Jack may have theft and blood on his hands, but his heart can’t be any colder than her own.

His hands aren’t cold but warm, against her cheek, upon her thigh. She shivers anyway, and he wraps his arms around her, saying, “Chilled? As a gentleman, I feel I must take it upon m’self to warm you, then.”

“Yes,” she whispers, closing her eyes, knotting her fingers into his hair. When he kisses her, his mouth burns the cold away. She lets him press her down and there is little further talk of where he can and cannot touch her, only a few shared murmurs of “here, lass” and “there, now – there.” She keeps her head enough to keep her shift bunched up but not tugged off and his breeches unlaced but not pulled down over his hips, and as he seems satisfied with that, she supposes his honor isn’t so dusty after all.

Jack rolls halfway over afterwards, slinging an arm around her waist. She bends her head to his shoulder and falls asleep beneath the shadow of his warmth.

But in her dreams she feels cold again, the pervasive cold of the deep sea, the thick cold of buried rum. The beach runs red with blood from Will’s slit throat. Jack cradles her head in his arm and slices his blade through her hair, burning the shorn tresses under the bright sun. She looks up at the sky, at the wisps of smoke drifting into fathomless blue, and wishes she could feel the sun beating down on her skin.
Music:: "andy you're a star," the killers
Mood:: 'apathetic' apathetic
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posted by [identity profile] zarahemla.livejournal.com at 04:33am on 21/04/2005
“Yes,” she whispers, closing her eyes, knotting her fingers into his hair.

They throw you down a rope when you're in trouble, baby
Screaming, save me
And they call it the rescue blues

(mmm, mmm. loved it)
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:44am on 22/04/2005
Thank you :)
 
posted by [identity profile] heroics.livejournal.com at 05:12am on 21/04/2005
I loved it. Every bit of it. Sparrabeth is my drug.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:44am on 22/04/2005
Thanks :)
 
posted by [identity profile] cymbeline.livejournal.com at 06:07am on 21/04/2005
I love the interaction of these two, her constantly on guard and him working his way around it quite deftly.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:45am on 22/04/2005
Thanks :)
 
posted by [identity profile] azziria.livejournal.com at 08:11am on 21/04/2005
Oh, bittersweet, bittersweet, but oh so lovely...
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:45am on 22/04/2005
Thank you :)
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:45am on 22/04/2005
Thanks!
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:45am on 22/04/2005
NOPE :) Thanks.
 
posted by [identity profile] ballincollig.livejournal.com at 02:53pm on 21/04/2005
So good, dala! Their entire interaction rings so true...

I particularly liked this line: as he seems satisfied with that, she supposes his honor isn’t so dusty after all.

Just confirms my beliefs about Jack: a pirate, to be sure, but a good man.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:46am on 22/04/2005
Thank you! :)
 
posted by [identity profile] tiggothy.livejournal.com at 04:55pm on 21/04/2005
So sweet, and gorgeous, and lovely, and "It would never've worked between us, darlin'."

*sighs and wants to huggle Jack* because he strikes me as the kind of guy who, whilst he wouldn't turn down a one night stand, and wouldn't ask for any more if the lass wanted no strings, would actually still be hoping that there might be something more...

With apologies for the length and convolutedness of that sentence...
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:46am on 22/04/2005
Heh, thank you :)
 
posted by [identity profile] hereswith.livejournal.com at 09:08pm on 21/04/2005
Absolutely great, loved the interaction between them and the ending, with her dream... wonderfully dark and angsty.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:46am on 22/04/2005
Thanks!
 
posted by [identity profile] finix.livejournal.com at 04:29pm on 22/04/2005
really really good. Sparrabeth is teh best!
 
posted by [identity profile] alwyshrt1uluv.livejournal.com at 01:20am on 23/04/2005
Loved it, specially the last paragraph.
 
posted by [identity profile] tseek-unique.livejournal.com at 09:15am on 23/04/2005
Oh, yes, Jack would naturally be concerned about saving a lady from a wild boar attack. “What if your upper half was bein’ attacked by a wild boar an’ I had t’ haul you safely away by your legs? What then?” Oh, if there were only a wild boar in this! Lovely and very, very hot sultry.
 
posted by [identity profile] shecrows.livejournal.com at 10:46am on 25/04/2005
Oh, but there is just too little good Sparrabeth (or any Sparrabeth at all) written these days. This was fabulous. ♥
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posted by [identity profile] juushika.livejournal.com at 04:00pm on 30/04/2005
This is a pairing, and a scene, that makes perfect sense. You've protrayed it very realisitically, while managing to keep the emotional depth and bittersweet touches throughout. It's nice work. Very nice.

I enjoyed reading.

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