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posted by [personal profile] the_dala at 12:04am on 19/05/2005 under
I did see KoH again, and lo, I did write. Very short, less than a page. It...has pairings -- Balian/Sibylla, Balian/his wife (whom I named Nathalie after the actress, because IMDB is a wonderful wonderful thing), possibly Balian/Baldwin if you squint REALLY hard -- but is more of a character piece. Littered with sentence fragments for some odd reason.Have at it! I need the practice!



Silk


Sibylla wears silk at night. Not the heavily embroidered cloth that makes up her daily dress, but a light, airy thing that flows to a puddle beside the bed when Balian pulls it over her head. It holds the cool of evening, she says, when the sun begins to rise.

Nathalie wore a silk shift beneath her homespun. A luxury they could scarcely afford, but the weather was turning cold and she needed the extra heat trapped against her skin. He could feel the warmth at the end of the day, when she lowered her cumbersome body to the mattress and laid his arm across her belly.

Baldwin wraps himself in strips of silk. It protects his skin from the chafing of royal robes, and it protects his attendants from the disease. From the danger of contracting it, naturally, but also from bearing the sight of his ravaged form.

He leans over to pick up the pale, slippery thing on the floor, runs it through his fingers. Afraid his touch might mar its beauty but unable to help himself. Sibylla stirs beside him, her fingers curling reflexively over his hip.

Balian clutches the silk dressing gown in his fist. It is beautiful and practical, but it is fragile. It will not protect her from being swallowed up by politics and ancient debts, as a desert sandstorm can swallow a man whole. Perhaps a better life could have saved his wife, but he could only give her the one to which he’d been born, and so her last layer was stripped away. And nothing can keep the people from fear that their anointed king is dying behind the shining mask, that his dream might die as well.

He fights for them all. The dusting of freckles over the bridge of her nose, the punishment so cruelly meted out, the red-rimmed faith in his eyes –that most of all, as each day passes and his land thrives and the threat of war grows ever closer. If it proves to be enough, God has willed it so; if He wills it, it will be enough.
Music:: "ibelin," harry gregson-williams
Mood:: 'nervous' nervous
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posted by [identity profile] veronica-rich.livejournal.com at 04:16am on 19/05/2005
I definitely need more of these little Balian character pieces. I'm not really of a mood to write for this fandom, just to read gen pieces (go figure! I think Jack/Will sap all the sex out of me).

"the red-rimmed faith in his eyes"

Great line. Though, did we ever get to see the man cry? I'm hoping that'll be in the extended DVD version.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 01:01pm on 19/05/2005
Who, Baldwin? I'd imagine it would irritate the sores around his eyes. SADNESS.

And thank you :)
 
posted by [identity profile] veronica-rich.livejournal.com at 12:14am on 20/05/2005
See, my problem is that I read that phrase as a description of Balian - I recognize the freckles as Sibylla's, but the "punishment" struck me as that which they all have to bear with the fall of Jerusalem and their known ways of life. So I thought "faith" referred to Balian himself (since I believe he does have faith, just not religion, it seems). Could be just my problem in comprehension, though.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 01:02pm on 19/05/2005
Thank you! And yes, both to seeing it again and the need for the script.
 
posted by [identity profile] elessil.livejournal.com at 08:31am on 19/05/2005
red-rimmed faith

This made me shiver. I love the mood to this, the thoughts and reasonings. Beautiful work, in my opinion.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 01:02pm on 19/05/2005
Thank you :)
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 01:03pm on 19/05/2005
Thank you! :)

I think I'm going to change 'undergarments' to 'shift' -- that was the sort of garment I had in mind, but it doesn't come through too clearly.
 
posted by [identity profile] yoiebear.livejournal.com at 11:11am on 19/05/2005
Beautiful
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 01:03pm on 19/05/2005
Thanks :)
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 10:38pm on 19/05/2005
Thank you! *smooch*
 
posted by [identity profile] cymbeline.livejournal.com at 04:59pm on 19/05/2005
Fabulous! I like how the silk connects all these people so dear to Balian.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 10:38pm on 19/05/2005
Thanks :)
 
posted by [identity profile] torn-eledhwen.livejournal.com at 10:35pm on 19/05/2005
Oooh, nice. Very smooth, somehow, rather like the silk it depicts.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 10:38pm on 19/05/2005
Thank you :)
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posted by [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com at 04:23pm on 25/05/2005
Beautifully done, as I said. Saving to memories. Thanks so much for providing the link--RL has been a bit hectic and I guess I've missed a few things on my flist.

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