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posted by [personal profile] the_dala at 07:37pm on 19/07/2005 under
First of [livejournal.com profile] pigeongirl99's requests: Jack/Will religious!kink.

Oh yeah.

Shameful abuse of Song of Solomon. Shameful abuse of Will's wits, really, although he's not complaining.



His Banner Over Me


In nomine Patris et Filii et Spiritus Sancti.”

“Jack, that’s blasphemous,” Will protests even as he shudders beneath Jack’s touch, the oil streaking his brow, the center of his breastbone, one nipple and then the other.

“And all we’ve been up to ain’t?” Jack inquires with a chuckle, swiping his tongue along the far left point of the cross. The boy’s skin tastes of peppermint and sweat and sin. Jack nips and licks his way up, over the pulse jumping in Will’s throat, along his jaw, to whisper in his ear, “‘Let him kiss me with the kisses of his mouth: for thy love is better than wine.'”

He spills more oil across Will’s belly, prompting a reflexive clench of muscles that makes him catch his own breath. “‘Because of the savor of thy good ointments thy name is as ointment poured forth, therefore do the virgins love thee.'” Will snorts at that, then breathes in sharp and swift as Jack’s fingers curve around his cock.

“‘Draw me,’” Jack murmurs, giving the lad’s rigid shaft a good, smooth pull, “‘we will run after thee: the king has brought me into his chambers...’” He slides his free hand once around the base, trickling oil down Will’s balls and into the cleft behind, urging Will’s thighs farther apart with his elbow. “'We will be glad and rejoice in thee –‘” Will cries out harshly as Jack presses a finger into him, his hips rising from the bed.

Jack strokes his cock harder, adds a second finger and a third, bites down gently on the soft lobe of the lad’s ear. “‘– we will remember thy love more than wine...’” Will’s arm goes tight around his shoulders, head nudging Jack’s, seeking his mouth to muffle the whimpers. Jack kisses him and plays the pleasure out within his body, then breaks away as he feels Will start to tremble.

“The upright love thee,’” he finishes, impressed with his powers of recall, “and so shall I.”

Will sobs like a raptured pilgrim when his seed spills over Jack’s skin.

“Well,” he sighs a few minutes later, cheeks still rose-pink, legs sprawled lazily and hand gripping Jack’s cock in a loose promise, “dirty poetry is certainly more appropriate than a holy symbol of the Church.”

Jack tucks his head under Will’s arm and laughs until his guts ache.
Music:: "angels would fall," melissa etheridge
Mood:: 'amused' amused
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posted by [identity profile] shinysilvercoin.livejournal.com at 01:16am on 20/07/2005
I'm not generally a fan of Jack/Will, but this is very "Mmmm!" :D I could totally imagine it happening. Well, okay, not in cannon, but it's still very much like Will's character.

Yum! ♥
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 04:10am on 21/07/2005
Thank you :)
 
posted by [identity profile] ceria-taliesin.livejournal.com at 01:31am on 20/07/2005
There is something lovely about a blasphemous Jack, and you did that very well. I adore these two.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 04:10am on 21/07/2005
Thanks :)
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posted by [personal profile] girlpearl at 07:41pm on 20/07/2005
first read "raptured pilgrim" - which really is a lovely turn of phrase - as "ruptured penguin.")

*for the SECOND TIME IN FIVE MINUTES snorts loud enough to garner A Look, which has graduated to A LOOK*

Oh, Dala. Everything Delectable Doola said, minus the bit with the penguins.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 04:13am on 21/07/2005
Thankee!

::gives you a A LOOK before sneaking off::
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 04:12am on 21/07/2005
*sporfle*

Dude, the Bible is chock full of the naughty and randy. And battalions of foxes with their tails lit on fire. (Seriously. It was Samson that used them as an attack squad, if I recall correctly.)
 
posted by [identity profile] shazzathegreat.livejournal.com at 02:34am on 20/07/2005
oh my, that is just...delicious. I love Jack quoting things, and this is just perfect for him. And so so hot...
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 04:13am on 21/07/2005
Thanks :)
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 04:14am on 21/07/2005
::giggles:: I read some fic, somewhere, in some fandom, where a character had been obliged to memorize bits of the Bible as a child and he chose Song of Solomon. It sort of stuck with me.
 
posted by [identity profile] xzombiexkittenx.livejournal.com at 07:30am on 20/07/2005
Bibleporn. *thud* I love blasphemy kink. Loveloveloveit and this is dirty and funny and "he finishes, impressed with his powers of recall that is wonderful. Trust Jack to be impressed with his own memory.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 04:14am on 21/07/2005
Jack always has time for self-congratulation :) Thank you!
 
posted by [identity profile] captsparrow4evr.livejournal.com at 11:58pm on 20/07/2005
You do Turrow so well! I can see this being set in the same -verse as [livejournal.com profile] hippediva's "All Things Bright and Beautiful." Great job!!
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 04:15am on 21/07/2005
Thanks :)
 
posted by [identity profile] pigeongirl99.livejournal.com at 05:07pm on 25/07/2005
Oh God. I just died and went... well I'd like to say heaven, but that doesn't sound too realistic :)

This is amazing.

And sacriligious.

And. Oh. So very hot.

Thank you so very much, I may be hell bound but I simply can't get enough of blasphemous!sex. So very sorry in my delay in replying- RL is simply not nearly as fun as life here.

Just incredible.

I worship you.

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