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posted by [personal profile] the_dala at 06:47pm on 25/07/2005 under
Last request for [livejournal.com profile] pigeongirl99: J/W, jealousy. Title from the Killers' "Mr. Brightside," which always makes me want to write twisty, angsty threesome fic. Speaking of the devil, after these three, [livejournal.com profile] veronica_rich, your request is going to be angstful.



Jealousy Turning Saints Into the Sea


Jack was jealous of Will’s sword. He wielded it with complete authority, never concentrating so fiercely on anything else, and he could go for hours at a time with only the enemies in his own head as opponents. Whatever skills he still lacked as a fledgling sailor were more than made up for in battle; one or two tides had been turned by the sight of young Turner cutting a grim swath with his sword. And oh, when he cleaned it and polished it, taking such care – one hand lightly but firmly wrapped around the hilt, the other running up and down the long, slender blade...

Will was jealous of Jack’s rum. Or, more precisely, the rum and the bottles in which it came. For one thing Jack was never without it, and little brought him greater joy than popping open a particularly good, well-aged brew. Once they’d captured a whole shipment of it and Will could have sworn tears sprang to the captain’s eyes. To watch him drink, really drink, when he had the leisure to enjoy it, was sheer torture. Will tried not to watch, but he was captivated by the sight of full lips pressed to the cool rim, a tanned throat working as he swallowed, tongue darting out to catch one last drop...

Only a fool with a death wish would have parted Will from his sword or Jack from his rum, and neither Jack nor Will fit such a description. Instead Will asked if he might share Jack’s bottle one starry night, and the next morning Jack asked if he might try a few passes with Will’s sword. That was where it started, they would later conclude.

Privately Jack had always wondered if Will slept with sword in hand or beneath his pillow, just as Will suspected Jack of hoarding his supply even while lost to slumber. Each man was delighted to discover that he’d been quite wrong, because the captain’s bunk was large enough for two occupants – provided they slept very close, and the two in question did – and not much else.
Music:: "smile like you mean it," the killers
Mood:: 'amused' amused
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 02:22am on 26/07/2005
Thanks :) Ooooh icon!
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 02:24am on 26/07/2005
Thanks :)
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 02:28am on 26/07/2005
Awp, thank you :)
 
posted by [identity profile] veronica-rich.livejournal.com at 03:12am on 26/07/2005
Oh, so very lovely. I love little studies of these two, especially together.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 02:22pm on 26/07/2005
Thanks :)
 
posted by [identity profile] jenthegypsy.livejournal.com at 10:03am on 26/07/2005
How double entendred of you! That first bit almost made me love Will's sword! Especially the phrase "...he could go for hours at a time with only the enemies in his own head as opponents."

Well executed and vastly revealing, as always!
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 02:23pm on 26/07/2005
Thank you :)
 
posted by [identity profile] tiggothy.livejournal.com at 02:50pm on 26/07/2005
Ooooh :-)

Now write some threesome or something, there's far too much J/W floating about... must be something in the air *wafts a pompous wig about to disperse the J/W aroma*

*snigger*
 
posted by [identity profile] pigeongirl99.livejournal.com at 05:11pm on 26/07/2005
Oh this is just so lovely. You've no idea how large a smile you've put on my face.

This is just so very exquisite, beautifully understated, and so very in character.

Thank you so very very much.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 01:37pm on 27/07/2005
I'm glad you enjoyed it :) They were excellent requests.
 
posted by [identity profile] tseek-unique.livejournal.com at 08:01am on 29/07/2005
Secret jealousies are fun! Short and delectable. I really like Will's maturity in this piece: ...one or two tides had been turned by the sight of young Turner cutting a grim swath with his sword. Young Will all grown up and taking his part. Well done!

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