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posted by [personal profile] the_dala at 12:11am on 17/09/2005 under
Lo and behold, I was actually able to get some writing done tonight. And it's request-oriented, if y'all can remember that far back. [livejournal.com profile] linaelyn requested Cotton ampersand, and that's what this is.



Refrain


Out of all the whores in Tortuga, Nancy wasn’t the prettiest or the lewdest or the merriest, but she was the only one could read. Leastwise, she’d never met any other. Later she wondered if he had sought her out a-purpose or if he came upon her by chance. He was a keen one, that old sailor, and he listened. Now and then she watched him in a group of his fellows and saw how most folk forgot he could hear because he couldn’t speak up, couldn’t interrupt their prattling tales and boasts. Men were funny like that. The women never forgot he had no tongue to wag.

It took some patience and, she must admit, some jingling of his purse before she could make sense of his gestures and his bird’s speech that first time.

“Sing?” she asked, confounded. “Ye want me t’ sing?”

John Cotton touched his grizzled throat again and nodded. The parrot cried, “A chantey, a chantey for the morn!” and then fell blessedly silent.

“An’ ye’ll pay me for’t, aye?” Nan wanted to know, suspicious, for no man’d ever approached her with such a proposition. Cotton nodded gravely and counted out the coins, the fee she’d named plus a bit besides, right into her hands. So Nan sang for her supper that night.

That was all he ever wanted, her voice and as quiet a spot as they could find for to make the most of it, ordinary though it was. He sat beside her, his blue eyes closed, patting her hand in reassurance when she fumbled a note. She knew a good number of songs and didn’t run out till the third time; he didn’t seem to mind her repeating her favorites.

Before long he was bringing her grubby sheets of music, handing each over like it was something precious. She would work out the shaky letters and bad spelling while he tapped the rhythm on his thigh, until between them they managed to cobble together something fit for singing. A couple of times he brought her ballads in Spanish or French, languages she’d heard often enough to mimic its cadence and spirit, even if she didn’t understand a bleeding word. Once there was a sweet tune in a lilting tongue unrecognizable yet tiptoeing on the edge of familiar, like she’d heard it in a dream sometime. That was the time he brought her an orange, peeling it while she sang so the scent filled her with each breath between verses.

The other girls giggled whenever she went off with him, needling her about Grandad and his wrinkles and his empty mouth. Nan took John Cotton's arm, gave his parrot a hunk of stale sourdough, and left them to their night's work.
Mood:: 'calm' calm
Music:: firefly theme (thank you hannah!)
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 04:48pm on 17/09/2005
Yay, you liked it :) I got stuck on this one for so long and then all of a sudden there was Nan ::shrugs:: Thanks!
 
posted by [identity profile] elessil.livejournal.com at 10:01am on 17/09/2005
Great work...it sets a wonderful and touching mood.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 04:49pm on 17/09/2005
Thanks ;)
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posted by [personal profile] order_of_chaos at 10:32am on 17/09/2005
I love you. Love Cotton too, and Nancy.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 04:49pm on 17/09/2005
Thank you :)
 
posted by [identity profile] azziria.livejournal.com at 12:04pm on 17/09/2005
Ah, lovely. Beautifully written, and hinting tantalizingly at John Cotton backstory. Thanks for writing this :-)
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 04:50pm on 17/09/2005
Glad you liked it, thanks!
 
posted by [identity profile] tiggothy.livejournal.com at 12:17pm on 17/09/2005
Fantastic. Don't think I've ever read anything so beautiful about Mr Cotton.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 04:50pm on 17/09/2005
Thank you :) Cotton's my favorite minor pirate. Not like you could tell or anything.
 
posted by [identity profile] delurker.livejournal.com at 12:39pm on 17/09/2005
This beautiful and wonderful and I love it. ♥!
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 04:50pm on 17/09/2005
Thanks!
 
posted by [identity profile] arabwel.livejournal.com at 01:21pm on 17/09/2005
... damn. you made me cry. In the good way. Wonderful :)
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 04:51pm on 17/09/2005
Thank you :)
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posted by [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com at 02:26pm on 17/09/2005
That was a wonderful story! What an original concept, and a great OC!

“Sing?” she asked, confounded. “Ye want me t’ sing?”

John Cotton touched his grizzled throat again and nodded. The parrot cried, “A chantey, a chantey for the morn!” and then fell blessedly silent.


A chantey for the morn, indeed! Thanks for this.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 04:51pm on 17/09/2005
Icon! Why do I have no Cotton icon? And thank you :)
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 04:51pm on 17/09/2005
Thanks :)
 
posted by [identity profile] cymbeline.livejournal.com at 05:48pm on 17/09/2005
This is a very nice little ficlet. And the OC is my namesake *giggle*
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 09:05pm on 17/09/2005
Hee, I'd forgotten that! Glad you liked it, thanks :)
 
posted by [identity profile] hereswith.livejournal.com at 08:36pm on 17/09/2005
This is lovely! I like it very much :-)
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 09:06pm on 17/09/2005
Thank you :)
 
posted by [identity profile] honorat.livejournal.com at 05:41am on 18/09/2005
What a lovely story of Mr. Cotton. It adds such depth to his character. One wonders why music means so much to him, and how he sang before he lost his tongue. Rather heart-breaking actually. The tender relationship between him and Nancy is so touching. And Nancy is a wonderful, independent, compassionate character. Well done.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 10:51pm on 18/09/2005
Thank you :)
 
posted by [identity profile] gryphons-lair.livejournal.com at 11:03pm on 22/09/2005
Oh, this was just lovely!

Thank you!
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 02:32pm on 27/09/2005
(a belated) Thank you :)
 
posted by [identity profile] tseek-unique.livejournal.com at 03:43am on 25/09/2005
This was beautifully done. It somehow seems very fitting that Cotton would love song. My favorite She would work out the shaky letters and bad spelling while he tapped the rhythm on his thigh Lovely!
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 02:32pm on 27/09/2005
Thank you :)

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