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posted by [personal profile] the_dala at 08:52pm on 31/10/2005 under
Halloween present. James gen and a ghost.



Linger


There is a dead man in Port Royal and James is the only one who can see him.

At first he merely catches glimpses in sight, sound, scent – the drag of worn boot heels across the cobbles, a moth-eaten feather wafting in a breeze, the smell of water-rotted wool. All is still and silent when he turns his head to investigate, and no one around him ever senses anything out of the ordinary. Thus he knows better than to show any reaction when he begins to see the man in full.

Never has James been witness to a more complete realization of the imaginary pirates he vanquished as a child. He is not old, precisely – one might call him aged, in ways that are evident to the eye but have nothing to do with years. He wears rags like the finest velvet. Beneath his waterstained hat hangs thinning brown hair and a rough tuft of beard. The blue appears to be washing out of his eyes, filmed over by weak yellow. His gnarled hands and ragged nails fill James with revulsion, but his sword and pistol do not. They are in excellent condition.

He does nothing, says nothing, but he makes things happen nonetheless. Wherever James has noticed him, there is soon a bad temper or a ruined supper or a fistfight. He has never favored the cat, but now and then a sailor makes a move toward violence and there is no choice, not if he doesn’t want the rest of them lashing out as well. His two lieutenants become involved in some private quarrel that leaves both tight-lipped and speaking only when it is absolutely necessary, which makes neither of them any sort of decent company.

The fort and the ships seem to be the dead man’s favorite spot, aside from any property belonging to the Turners. Their home is vandalized one afternoon while the maid is setting the table, just before Will comes home for the evening. Elizabeth comes upon one of intruders in the parlor and shoots him in the head, but the other two escape with several heirlooms passed down through her mother’s family. The men are never found and the stolen items never recovered. Not a week later, a normally placid horse belonging to a wheelwright aims a kick directly at Will’s head. He manages to duck out of the way, but breaks his collarbone in the process, which will leave the smithy in the hands of his young apprentice for at least six weeks. From what James hears, his recovery will not be eased by domestic bliss. Most attribute the couple’s rumored difficulties to youth and new marriage, while some claim smugly that it only serves them right. No one but James sees the stranger’s leer as he slips around the corner.

He has no idea why he should be the only one to whom the dead man is visible, but it isn’t foremost on his mind. No matter the reason, ridding the town of this unwanted guest is clearly his responsibility. His theory that the church may be able to help is dashed when he goes to a priest and finds a woman of a certain reputation occupying the confession booth. He hopes this lapse in judgement is also due to the ripple of bad behavior caused by Port Royal’s self-appointed foe.

At twelve o’clock midnight on a clear, windy Friday, James Norrington steps out his back door. The dead man is standing under the broadleaf tree by the gate. He inclines his head and grins nastily, showing rotted teeth.

James is struck by a sudden urge to straighten his uniform, adjust his wig, but he keeps one arm straight at his side, the other hand at his blade. There is a cross clumsily embroidered on his breast pocket, beneath the brocade.

“You do not belong here,” he says evenly. The wind picks up, stinging his eyes.

The man waves one arm in a lazy gesture oddly reminiscent of Jack Sparrow. “I’ve always had a talent fer insinuatin’ meself inta places I don’t belong.” His voice is as oily as his smile. Yet as James crosses the yard to stand nearer, he notices that the moonlight clings where it shouldn’t, and he smells fresh salt air instead of decay. He wonders briefly if his presence is even necessary, if the dead man will simply fade away like so much mist whether or not James intervenes.

But he is reminded of the pirates of Isla de Muerte, and the pirates had to be killed, down to the last.

“Leave.” His voice turns harsh and his fingers tighten on the hilt of his sword.

“Don’t be sassin’ me, lad,” says the dead man. “Ye may puff up like a rooster, but ye’d die as quick as yer men did.”

The pirates – of course – absurd, that James failed to make the connection beforehand. Then again, he never saw the captain, and perhaps he still shrinks from thoughts of that night, no matter how brave he might seem on this one.

Seeing his face change, the captain’s sickly blue eyes glow with pleasure. “Aye, they bled an’ died, an’ some wander that rock still. Maybe a soul or two walks yer deck at night, weepin’ fer th’ commodore’s pride, fer their lost sweethearts.”

He wants James to flinch, watches for it with avidity. He seems almost desperate now, needing this one final haunt, reaching for a man’s guilt with greedy fingers. Though his chest contracts and his feet cramp in his shoes, James does not set his jaw, or raise a brow, or turn his head away, or give any other outward sign that he has heard.

“You have no power,” he says, forcing himself to speak calmly. “What little you once had was stolen, and it cannot be claimed in death.”

“I claimed that bitch’s dreams,” the dead captain snarls, his shoulders hunching in rage. “I took her in ‘er sleep, showed ‘er what we’d’ve done t’er, an’ laughed when she screamed in th’ whelp’s arms.”

James allows himself a moment of anger on behalf of Elizabeth and Will before countering, “But you can’t touch the Black Pearl, or you would be deviling Jack Sparrow until the day he dies.”

Even as he gnashes his teeth he is growing paler, black fury washing to gray. “He’ll die alone, cursin’ th’ day his mam birthed ‘im, cursin’ th’ sea fer her treachery – an’ so too will thee, James Norrington.”

“Perhaps,” says James, clasping his arms behind his back. “I pray I can find peace where you have not, and Sparrow, too.” He is surprised to find that he means every word.

He looks aghast at that, rocked by the notion that James should wish an enemy anything but pain and misery. With a thin smile, James turns and walks back to his door in slow, steady strides. He thinks he hears some invective called to him, but it is too faint to make out. When he turns at the steps, there is nothing beneath the tree but a rotten apple core.
Mood:: 'bitchy' bitchy
Music:: "haunted," poe
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posted by [identity profile] xzombiexkittenx.livejournal.com at 02:04am on 01/11/2005
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

*squeals happily and keyboard smashes*
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:31am on 02/11/2005
Gracias :)
 
posted by [identity profile] marinarusalka.livejournal.com at 02:10am on 01/11/2005
Beautiful. Great spooky atmosphere, great characterisation of Norrington and ghost!Barbossa. I could hear the actors' voices saying the dialogue in my head as I read. I'd never before considered the fact that Norrington hadn't seen Barbossa, but you make perfect use of it here. Brava.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:32am on 02/11/2005
Thank you! I've always wanted to get Norrington and Barbossa in a scene together somehow, and this seemed a perfect opportunity.
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posted by [personal profile] order_of_chaos at 02:49am on 01/11/2005
*worships gleefully*
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:32am on 02/11/2005
Thanks :)
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posted by [identity profile] dzurlady.livejournal.com at 03:13am on 01/11/2005
This is very cool. I love the ending.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:32am on 02/11/2005
Thank you :)
 
posted by [identity profile] gryphons-lair.livejournal.com at 03:33am on 01/11/2005
*shiver*

Leave it to Barbossa to find a way to make trouble even after he was dead.

But he didn't count on James being James, did he?
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:33am on 02/11/2005
The man seems to have a problem with underestimating people. Thanks :)
 
posted by [identity profile] kahva.livejournal.com at 03:38am on 01/11/2005
Ooh, I'm very glad I spotted you at [livejournal.com profile] little_details! Now I see where the clavicle question came from.

A very nice, spooky fic, excellent job here! You've captured Norrington's voice, Barbossa's too. I too can hear the voices of the actors in this, particularly for Norrington. Well done! :)

(Pssst... When I first clicked on your link for "Linger" in [livejournal.com profile] pirategasm, it went to "Things That Go Bump In The Night". Just letting you know! :) )
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:34am on 02/11/2005
Thank you for pointing that out! How embarrassing :) Glad you're hanging around.
 
posted by [identity profile] felaine.livejournal.com at 04:34am on 01/11/2005
So spooky and accurate to all the characters; I can hear all of them. What a perfect read for Halloween night, by candlelight no less.
I had the same problem with getting sent to the wrong fic from feed the bunnies and I'm so glad I was able to track this down.
Felaine
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:34am on 02/11/2005
I apologize for the faulty link -- thank you for sticking with it!
 
posted by [identity profile] rennie1265.livejournal.com at 06:29am on 01/11/2005
Nice treat for what's left of Halloween. Pesky fellow, that Barbossa. Looks like he's met his match. Good show.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:35am on 02/11/2005
Thanks :)
 
posted by [identity profile] elessil.livejournal.com at 11:02am on 01/11/2005
Guh. This is creepy and absolutely wonderful and I absolutely adore the James/Barbossa confrontation.

GUH.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:36am on 02/11/2005
Gracias :)
 
posted by [identity profile] delurker.livejournal.com at 11:14am on 01/11/2005
Eee! I am filled with love from this story. ::happy::
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:36am on 02/11/2005
Thankee!
 
posted by [identity profile] hendercats.livejournal.com at 11:18am on 01/11/2005
“You have no power,” he says, forcing himself to speak calmly. “What little you once had was stolen, and it cannot be claimed in death.”
Marvelous line! Great Halloween story. Now, why is it that what really gave me the chills was that rotten apple core?
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:37am on 02/11/2005
Hee. Thanks!
 
posted by [identity profile] captsparrow4evr.livejournal.com at 01:46pm on 01/11/2005
This is most excellent! I truly regretted that James never got to meet Hector in the film. This was a fine way for them to have that encounter. As others have said, you got the voices down perfectly. I love the fact that James feels compelled to deal with this ghostly pirate just as he did the real ones. Brava!
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:37am on 02/11/2005
Thank you! I've always been intrigued by how Barbossa and Norrington might interact. And I love your icon :)
 
posted by [identity profile] jaekayelle.livejournal.com at 02:44pm on 01/11/2005
This is all shivery and spoooky. That last line really punched the atmosphere of the story into creepy territory. Loved it!
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:38am on 02/11/2005
Thanks :)
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posted by [identity profile] louphoenix.livejournal.com at 03:52pm on 01/11/2005
A perfect story for Halloween! Wonderful characterisation and creepy atmosphere, but what really got me was the last line.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:38am on 02/11/2005
It does seem to be the most popular :) Thanks!
 
posted by [identity profile] ex-galadhir.livejournal.com at 04:30pm on 01/11/2005
I second all the above. Great to see a final confrontation between Norrington and Barbossa. The things that got me most were (as with everyone) the rotten apple core and also the hastily embroidered cross over James' heart - he's not quite as confident as he'd have you believe, is he - and who can blame him. Great story!
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:39am on 02/11/2005
Thank you! :)
 
posted by [identity profile] thekestrel.livejournal.com at 03:13pm on 02/11/2005
Wouldn't you just know it. Barbossa has to haunt Port Royal and the Dauntless. Leaving nasty bit's of himself in his wake, affecting or is it, infecting, everyone he can. Nice shivery Halloween story. I loved the visual of the rotten apple core.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:53am on 03/11/2005
Thanks :)
 
posted by [identity profile] classics-lover.livejournal.com at 03:09pm on 09/11/2005
Nice!
You definitely pinned James' voice. I must admit, the identity of the dead man puzzled me as much as it did James, right up until James' realisation - well done on that!
And James, taking on responsibility for the entire town's wellbeing - so like him. He must have a real hero complex.
 
posted by [identity profile] tseek-unique.livejournal.com at 12:11am on 16/11/2005
Your characterization of Barbossa and all the dialogue is just superb. I love James' calm and inner peace. *applauds*

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