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posted by [personal profile] the_dala at 06:39pm on 08/11/2005 under
[livejournal.com profile] hils requested Sparrington hurt/comfort. Yeah, that pretty much covers it. Raise your hand if OUCH (::raises hand:: and I wrote the damn thing!)

I checked the lyrics to "All I Want Is You," just to see if I could squeeze another title out of it, and lo, there it is.



Treasure Just to Look Upon It


He is a great teller of tales, and he tells himself that this one isn’t happening.

When he loses his grip and takes a tumble from the rigging, when he breaks a bottle of rum in his cabin – simple accidents, could happen to anyone.

If he waits a beat before firing a broadside for an affirmative grunt from Gibbs, it’s because he shows respect for his men, and Gibbs is close at his side because he is loyal to his captain.

He doesn’t read much any more because really, what could be more unseemly for a pirate?

There’s no call for the captain to take a night watch, nor to be on deck at any point after sunset if he doesn’t wish it.

Even when he can lie to himself no longer, he brushes it off. The pain is nothing. He has always sailed by feel and instinct, by listening to the Pearl. Every map he possesses is etched upon his memory as clearly as on parchment. His pistols and sword are respected even if they aren’t drawn. The crew trust him, down to a man, so much so that none would ever utter a word about it, not even Anamaria. As long as there’s light he can still make out the idea of things, and more often than not, the idea is the essence.

He has climbed the trellis to the commodore’s window so many times that his fingers and feet need no sight to guide them. And this is far from the first time he’s stumbled over the ledge.

“Graceful as always, Jack,” James drawls.

Jack gets to his feet, scarcely aware of the rising storm within until it breaks. Snarling, he lunges across the room and sweeps the lamp off the table, so hard that the glass shatters against the side of the bed.

James shouts and stomps on the remains in his slippered feet, before the flame can catch on the braided rug. He grabs Jack by the shoulders and shakes him once, hard, shock blurring with anger in his voice.

“What on earth is wrong with – Jack, for God’s sake – look at me, damn it all!”

He drops his head into his hands, clutching his skull. James falls silent. Slowly, carefully, he pries Jack’s fingers away from his face. Jack blinks – let him, let him see if he insists – then opens his eyes as wide as he can to drink in the green until a shadow passes over the moon and he plunges himself into darkness.

“Oh, Jack,” James whispers, his voice a raw ache, his hands growing heavy on Jack’s shoulders. He smells of something warm and spicy, something that is always James. His skin, when Jack leans against his neck and draws a ragged breath in through his mouth, tastes bitter from the powder of his wig and salty from the ocean air.

Jack begins to shake. James folds him in infinitely gentle arms, kisses his closed eyes over and over. Sinking onto the bed, he murmurs as soft as the sea, and his lips are cool against the sting of tears.




AN: No, I don't know what specifically is causing the problem. I tried Wikipedia, but I got depressed really quickly. Eighty million different things can cause blindness, apparently.
Mood:: 'lazy' lazy
Music:: "grey sky eyes," carbon leaf
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posted by [identity profile] meletor-et-al.livejournal.com at 11:42pm on 08/11/2005
...

eeehrhehherhehghe
*squeak*
...
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 01:27am on 10/11/2005
*patpat*
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posted by [identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com at 12:45am on 09/11/2005
Oh my. This is beautiful, and devastating, and sensual.

By the way, followed the post from pirategasm and sparrington to your journal, as there appears to be no text or link.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 01:27am on 10/11/2005
*facepalm* Fixed. Thank you, and thank you!
 
posted by [identity profile] jane-says.livejournal.com at 12:49am on 09/11/2005
::wibble wibble cry::
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 01:28am on 10/11/2005
Awww! ::pats::
 
posted by [identity profile] xzombiexkittenx.livejournal.com at 12:54am on 09/11/2005
Oh man. Ow. This hurt a lot. All the little things, all the minutue of going blind were so beautifully summed up into this ficlet of sheer hurt.

You had me at the first line.

Coincidentally, I'm in the middle of writing a blind!sparrow piece (which has been put on hold until december) and damn you for making me want to write that instead of anything else.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 01:29am on 10/11/2005
DO IT!

And thanks :)
 
posted by [identity profile] gryphons-lair.livejournal.com at 02:13am on 09/11/2005
*winces*

*snuggles Jack*

Cruelly brilliant, my dear. (And yes, that's a compliment.)
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 01:32am on 10/11/2005
Thank you :)
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posted by [identity profile] porridgebird.livejournal.com at 02:40am on 09/11/2005
Ow indeed, that was painful. But also very sweet - how loved Jack is!

Beautifully written :)
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 01:33am on 10/11/2005
Thank you! :)
 
posted by [identity profile] shrieking-ell.livejournal.com at 03:43am on 09/11/2005
Ohhhh! So sad and brave and touching.

Love it!
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 01:33am on 10/11/2005
Thanks :)
 
posted by [identity profile] jedipirate.livejournal.com at 04:30am on 09/11/2005
*sniffle* =( Poor Jack.

*wibble*

*cuddles the two*

Tis sadly, sweetly, bitterly, painfully beautiful.

*sigh*
 
posted by [identity profile] jedipirate.livejournal.com at 02:55pm on 09/11/2005
And I should have used this icon in the first place.
*cuddles fic again*
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 01:34am on 10/11/2005
Och, icon! ::whimpers:: Thanks :)
 
posted by [identity profile] felaine.livejournal.com at 05:08am on 09/11/2005
What a surprise; I wasn't expecting a story like this, but it is beautifully done and effective.
Felaine
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 01:36am on 10/11/2005
Thank you!
 
posted by [identity profile] hils.livejournal.com at 07:20am on 09/11/2005
Aww!!!! Wonderful fic *sniffles*
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 01:36am on 10/11/2005
Thank you, dear :)
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 01:37am on 10/11/2005
Thank you! :)
 
posted by [identity profile] misskass.livejournal.com at 09:17am on 09/11/2005
It's beautiful how Jack has been with the Pearl long enough to know practically every nook and cranny without needing to see it, and how he knows all his favourite things (namely the Pearl and James) by touch alone. So romantic...
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 01:39am on 10/11/2005
Thank you :)
 
posted by [identity profile] elessil.livejournal.com at 09:26am on 09/11/2005
Mymymymy poor pirate! *huggles and pets him*

Heartbreaking. OUCH.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 01:39am on 10/11/2005
*patpat* Thanks :)
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posted by [identity profile] rosiespark.livejournal.com at 11:02am on 09/11/2005
Ouch indeed! ::sobs:: This is so sad, but perfect.

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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 01:40am on 10/11/2005
Thanks :)
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posted by [identity profile] rosiespark.livejournal.com at 05:45pm on 13/11/2005
And I forgot to say how much I love the title - just perfect!
 
posted by [identity profile] captsparrow4evr.livejournal.com at 02:03pm on 09/11/2005
What is it with us authors that we have to be so *$%@($ly cruel to Jack as to take his eyesight away? Not only did I do it in a most nasty way in A Most Exquisite Form but I have a chapter in a novel where Jack also goes blind but in a different form. It's those pretty eyes, I guess.

Beautiful and very sad. Lovely descriptions. Excellent work, as always.:)
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 01:42am on 10/11/2005
Dude, I'll maim any of these guys. I like to watch them suffer -- they do it so prettily :)

Thank you!
 
posted by [identity profile] berne.livejournal.com at 08:11pm on 09/11/2005
Ouch, darling. It was beautiful, especially the crew's handling of the situation (*loves Gibbs*) and James' initial anger and then... Ouch, ouch, ouch.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 01:42am on 10/11/2005
::pats:: Thank you.
 
posted by [identity profile] jaekayelle.livejournal.com at 11:17pm on 09/11/2005
ohhh...J-Jack...whimper...and he went to James for comfort...
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 01:43am on 10/11/2005
::whimpers along::
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posted by [identity profile] wemblee.livejournal.com at 03:27am on 10/11/2005
I don't know you, and I'm not Norrington, and it's text and not arms, but:

{{{{{{{{ }}}}}}}}}}}
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 03:48am on 10/11/2005
I didn't know that. Oh man. I'm no Norrington, but, ::hugs HARD::

::still hugging::
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posted by [identity profile] wemblee.livejournal.com at 03:27am on 10/11/2005
Ouch. So good.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 03:47am on 10/11/2005
Thankee :)
 
posted by [identity profile] mccleverly.livejournal.com at 08:16pm on 10/11/2005
*Much in the way of tears.* Wow... so lovely. Far too lovely.

Glad you like the icon, btw. :P
 
posted by [identity profile] woolymonkey.livejournal.com at 02:58pm on 19/03/2007
That is just lovely. Poor sad Jack. Good thing he knows his way up James trellis...

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