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posted by [personal profile] the_dala at 09:06pm on 14/06/2006 under
::waves:: Hullo. I have all manner of things to relate, but first, I have committed fic off the [livejournal.com profile] potc_dogwatch drabble prompts: triple drabble set (ish; 125, 125 and 140 words respectively, counting subtitles -- it was supposed to be even but Jack would go on...). One prompt per drabble. PG. Implied Jack/Will/Elizabeth. Title from Billy Joel's 'You're My Home.'


Never Be a Stranger

tales

Elizabeth has always loved her pirate stories, and hearing them from the mouths of genuine salted pirates delights her to no end. She can listen to Jack or Gibbs talk until they’re hoarse, for hours on end – sitting forward with her chin in her hands or leaning back against Will’s legs as he combs his fingers idly through her short hair, hazel eyes alight with interest even as she quirks a brow in skepticism. Now and then they seem to repeat themselves, but she doesn’t mind, for no gifted tongue spins the exact same yarn twice.

She whispers the tales to herself, at night when the men are fast asleep and the moon is bright, thinking with pride that they belong to her now.


peas in a pod

Will enjoys the stories too, especially the ones of Jack’s youth and his father’s life, but he finds he can only listen for so long. In much the same way, there are moments when Jack and Elizabeth as a combined force are too much for him to take, and he longs for the deafening roar of the forge and the silence – first companionable and then turned sour as the drink took hold – of his old master.

He comes upon Mr. Cotton in the galley one morning, carving wood in apparent peace, and stutters an apology for interrupting. Cotton smiles at him as he backs away; takes his boots off the empty bench; holds out a knot of wood. So Will sits.


the pirate’s code

Jack never put much stock in man’s law – not men who can buy and sell other men, cut a boy’s ear off for snatching an apple, burn and ravage in the name of religion. But he loves the Code, appreciating the opportunity to ignore it so much that he rarely does so. The Code is at once about every man for himself, and every man for his ship, which Jack sees as every man for every other man since the ship’s what’s keeping them all afloat anyhow.

If he wasn’t so keenly aware of the dichotomous nature of the Code, he might have been surprised and bothered to find himself growing to need two young fools as much as he needs his Pearl; but Jack tries never to be surprised, and he’s hardly ever as bothered as he puts on.
Mood:: 'accomplished' accomplished
Music:: le billy
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:44am on 16/06/2006
Thank you :)
 
posted by [identity profile] ceria-taliesin.livejournal.com at 01:58am on 15/06/2006
Yay!

Cotton smiles at him as he backs away; takes his boots off the empty bench; holds out a knot of wood. So Will sits.

Love the drabbles.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:47am on 16/06/2006
Thank you :)
 
posted by [identity profile] felaine.livejournal.com at 02:32am on 15/06/2006
Great stuff, and gems in each one.
1) Elizabeth's pride that the pirate tales she loved so much are hers now; she's part of them.
2) Jack and Liz together are indeed a force of nature and it's no wonder Will has to 'take a moment' occasionally.
3) Jack needing the whelps as they need him, but keeping the vow to himself never to be surprised.
Insightful and fun.
Felaine
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:47am on 16/06/2006
Thank you for the feedback! :)
 
posted by [identity profile] sinister-beauty.livejournal.com at 02:37am on 15/06/2006
Loved it!
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:47am on 16/06/2006
Thanks :)
 
posted by [identity profile] artic-fox.livejournal.com at 07:14am on 15/06/2006
Don't know what else to say, but that I loved it. You've captured the characters well, and I look forward to more fics from you :)
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:48am on 16/06/2006
Thank you :)
 
posted by [identity profile] pirates-cove13.livejournal.com at 07:16am on 15/06/2006
I love this picture of Jack and his view of the code - every man for the ship, so every man for every other. Jack is comfortable with dichotomies and contradictions and in my opinion is incredibly honest because he never hides who he is. Great stuff to put so much in a drabble!
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:48am on 16/06/2006
Thank you! :)
 
posted by [identity profile] pinkdormouse.livejournal.com at 07:37am on 15/06/2006
I like those.

Yay Cotton.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:49am on 16/06/2006
Thanks :)
 
posted by [identity profile] anneh-le-pirate.livejournal.com at 11:51am on 15/06/2006
Jack never put much stock in man’s law – not men who can buy and sell other men, cut a boy’s ear off for snatching an apple, burn and ravage in the name of religion. But he loves the Code, appreciating the opportunity to ignore it so much that he rarely does so.

Love that line because it's so true and so entirely Jack. It gives his existence as a pirate reason--brilliant, unarguable, reason. Well done.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:49am on 16/06/2006
Thank you :)
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:53am on 16/06/2006
Gracias :)
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 12:53am on 16/06/2006
Thankee :)

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