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posted by [personal profile] the_dala at 11:28pm on 04/12/2006 under
Um, "Heroes" fic? I made a threat and I carried it out, people. Respect. And please tell me what you think, for writing in another fandom is frightened. Peter/Claire, no spoilers for tonight's episode (assumes a future in which our heroes do in fact stop that bomb, or whatever, in addition to meeting all the way up).



Survival


Claire had fallen asleep in front of a rerun of “Three’s Company,” and might have stayed that way if the apartment door didn’t tend to stick in warm weather. She stirred at the sound of Peter kicking it in retribution, opened her eyes at his muttered curse, and rolled them as she turned around. Then she caught a look at him and a yawn died in her throat.

“What the hell happened?”

Touching a cut on his forehead that was still bleeding sluggishly, Peter shrugged. “Trust me, you don’t wanna know.” He tried to smile at her, but the bruise blooming on his cheekbone turned it into a wince. “Any messages?”

Nathan had called an hour ago and Hiro had stopped by around six. Since neither had brought news about unhappy constituents or a new potential end to the world, she didn’t think twice about a little white lie. It was her favorite kind of lie, these days.

“Nope. Come here,” she ordered with the finger-snap that was half a legacy from her mother and half from the Union Wells High School cheer squad. The edges of the cut were already beginning to shrink, but it clearly wasn’t the worst of the beating; he circled the couch slowly rather than tossing himself over the back of it like she was forever complaining about. Sinking into the cushions with a groan, he closed his eyes as she gently touched his face, his shoulders, his stomach – he flinched at that, and she spread her hands flat on either side of his ribcage. The familiar faint crackle of bone mending itself made them both grit their teeth. He drew in a deep, relieved breath, nodded without opening his eyes, and Claire tucked herself against him.

“You know you don’t actually have to be touching me to do all that,” he remarked, wrapping one arm around her and stretching the other out for the remote control.

“I know,” she said, around the yawn that had returned in double force. “I just like to, is all.” And it keeps me from thinking about the day I might not be there, she said to herself, a long habit of hanging out with Matt causing her to add, You stupid idiot. Peter’s chest rumbled in a laugh and he kissed the top of her head.

She considered protesting the switch from TV Land to the eleven o’clock news, but she knew Peter would doze off in a few minutes; healing always left him a little groggy. So she resigned herself to local politics and shameless fearmongering, curling her fingers around his wrist to make an easy grab for the remote, and also so she could feel the steady beat of his pulse against her palm.
Mood:: 'anxious' anxious
Music:: tds
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posted by [identity profile] introductory.livejournal.com at 05:39am on 05/12/2006
Oh, oooh. (I can't really think of anything coherent, but that? I could definitely see it happening.)

As for writing in a new fandom--I think it's nervewracking about Heroes because (previously) whatever one posted on Monday would be completely shattered to pieces the next, and I think it's more challenging because there's just so much we don't know.

Which really translates to: write more plz.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 01:42pm on 06/12/2006
Thank you! :) Yeah, I've never written in a TV fandom before, especially one where the canon is evolving as quickly as "Heroes." On the other hand, the looooong hiatus does provide a relatively stable universe for a time...:)
 
posted by [identity profile] meli-64.livejournal.com at 01:50am on 07/12/2006
Ooo, really good. :D
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 03:33pm on 07/12/2006
Thanks! :)
 
posted by [identity profile] frellingblonde.livejournal.com at 02:08am on 07/12/2006
Very sweet and perfectly in-character. :D
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 03:36pm on 07/12/2006
Thank you :)
 
posted by [identity profile] mellowdee.livejournal.com at 02:30am on 07/12/2006
Ah, I loved this. Very very sweet. :)
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 03:36pm on 07/12/2006
Thank you! :)
 
posted by [identity profile] nylonhotel.livejournal.com at 02:33am on 07/12/2006
I love the air of domesticity. And the detail about the finger-snap.

This is easily one of the best offerings for this pairing around. Warm without being mired in shippy treacle -- very cool.

Write more, por favor! :)
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 03:37pm on 07/12/2006
Thank you very much! I seem to have been sucked fully into this universe, so more is immediately forthcoming :)
 
posted by [identity profile] lovefromgirl.livejournal.com at 03:44am on 07/12/2006
Matt/Audrey and Claire -would- get along, wouldn't they? ^_^ I have a feeling Audrey would find she has a lot more in common with Claire than it seems.

Thanks for this fic. It's a real pick-me-up, mooshy and remarkably -real-. I loved the detail about the apartment door sticking, and how she gets mad when he hops over the back of the sofa.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 03:37pm on 07/12/2006
Thank you! :) Yeah, I'd really like to explore the dynamics of the characters who haven't met yet...
 
posted by [identity profile] shimmeree.livejournal.com at 04:34am on 07/12/2006
I really liked that.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 03:38pm on 07/12/2006
Thanks :)
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 03:38pm on 07/12/2006
Thank you! :)
 
posted by [identity profile] twnty7.livejournal.com at 01:04pm on 07/12/2006
Cute and sweet. I loved it. You should write more Heroes fics. ;)
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 03:38pm on 07/12/2006
Definitely :) Thanks!
 
posted by [identity profile] rawthorne.livejournal.com at 04:23pm on 07/12/2006
Really good. The plot worked and you've got an amazing writing style. It's very visual and descriptive without falling into the superflous. I can see what's happening without getting bored by all the irrelevant details. Every word seems correctly placed to build up layers of this little scene. Very very good. I'm under the spell and can only wait eagerly for more.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 11:07pm on 10/12/2006
Thank you very much! :)
 
posted by [identity profile] danamulder.livejournal.com at 08:34am on 10/12/2006
Too adorable! :)
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 11:07pm on 10/12/2006
Thanks :)

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