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posted by [personal profile] the_dala at 09:36pm on 26/05/2007 under
Short, short future ficlet - nearly fifty years in the future, in fact. Will/Elizabeth, and James. Spoilers for AWE; one of many ways to interpret the canon, but one of the first that occured to me when I walked out of the theater.



One Last Shot


Eight years after Will returned to Elizabeth for the fourth time, she came to him for the first.

Her eyesight was not so good as it had once been, so she didn't see the Dutchman in the low gloom. Leaning against the rail, Will closed his eyes against the sight of her small boat bobbing closer.

"You knew this day would come." The voice at his side was quiet, warm, familiar.

Will swallowed against a dry throat. "I did," he said thickly, forcing himself to watch her approach. "But it feels so soon."

James laid a hand on his elbow. "It will not feel that way to her." Will nodded, grateful for the comfort as he had been grateful of the man's company on his crew over nearly fifty years. The time had left no mark on either of them, though Will had had to hide his shock the last time he'd seen his wife. She saw it anyway, and her brown eyes had flooded until Will took her hand and kissed the soft, papery skin of her cheek.

Now he put his hands to his mouth and shouted, "Ahoy, Mistress Turner!"

Elizabeth looked up at him, and raised her arm in greeting. She climbed aboard with care, Will hanging over the side to help her up. She was light as a bird, more fragile than she'd been eight years ago, but he folded her in his arms without a moment's pause.

"Oh, Elizabeth, I'm sorry..."

She pulled back, smiling up at him with every bit of her old charm and cheek. "I'm not. Here I am on the Dutchman at last! Though I was sorry to say goodbye to the children. They are both well, by the way, and our grandchildren too. I gave them your love before I left." She said it with no more weight than if she'd gone out for tea. Will supposed having a husband employed as the Charon of the open seas made one somewhat blasé about facing death.

"It's a good thing you put to sea, or else this would have been much more difficult to manage," James put in. He had been standing off to one side, but now he stepped forward to embrace her.

"James Norrington," Elizabeth whispered, holding his face in her hands. She was smiling, though her eyes were shining with tears. "I thanked you once, nearly twenty years ago, but I would thank you again."

James bent his head in graceful acknowledgement and quirked an eyebrow at Will. "Ready?"

"I am." Will slipped his arm around Elizabeth's waist. "Are you?"

Glancing up at the luffing sails overhead, James shook his head, more in bemusement than in refusal. "I suppose so. It seems strange that Jack Sparrow isn't here to gloat over the moment."

"Perhaps he'll find a way to join us one day," said Elizabeth lightly. "When he gets tired of skipping about these earthly seas."

Will turned to her, biting his lip. He didn't want to make her self-conscious of the effects of age, but - "Darling, you did remember the chest?"

"Here, sir," huffed the man who had gone down to the boat to fetch it up. The original chest was once again nested in another, which was full of memories. Will knelt down to open it, thumbing through the letters they had been unable to send, to and from each other and their family. He touched a new lock of dark, baby-fine hair.

"Oh, I'd forgotten," said Elizabeth, her hand on his shoulder. "Anna's child was born in October. They named him William, though they left off 'The Fifth' at my request."

He touched the lock to his lips before releasing it and working the smaller chest free. His own heart felt too heavy in his hands; he wondered that Elizabeth had borne the burden for so long.

James had already drawn the dagger, though he looked at the heart with some apprehension when Will handed it off to him. "This seems somewhat barbaric."

"It doesn't hurt," Will offered.

"You were as good as dead at the time, my love," Elizabeth reminded him.

"As am I," said James wryly, adjusting his grip on the dagger handle. "All right, into the boat with you both, I can handle it from here."

Will caught his eye. There was no need to voice his gratitude, though James accepted the unspoken words with a smile and shooed them off the ship.

After Elizabeth was handed down to him, Will was struck by sudden panic. "Wait," he said urgently, gripping her skirt. "What if it doesn't work? What if we're separated?" After all these years, if something were to go wrong -

"Will Turner," said Elizabeth, lacing her fingers through his, "you aren't going anywhere without me. Not this time."
Music:: "hoist the colors"
Mood:: 'cheerful' cheerful
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posted by [identity profile] shrieking-ell.livejournal.com at 01:43am on 27/05/2007
*sigh*

*sniff*

absolutely lovely. the way things should have ended.

*adds to personal canon*

(I might be writing the bit where James firsts sails the Dutchman under Will...)
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 01:49am on 27/05/2007
My dear, we might all be writing that bit - I know I am :) Can it be that, at long last, Will/James gets its proper due in fandom when one of them is dead and the other sort of dead yet sort of immortal?

And thank you :)
 
posted by [identity profile] crevette.livejournal.com at 01:55am on 27/05/2007
TEARS! TEARS!!

This is absolutely beautiful. Thank you!
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 11:16pm on 27/05/2007
Thanks!
 
posted by [identity profile] bombazzinedoll.livejournal.com at 01:58am on 27/05/2007
*bursts into tears*
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 11:16pm on 27/05/2007
Awww..
 
posted by [identity profile] yoiebear.livejournal.com at 02:00am on 27/05/2007
I loved it! Bittersweet and true to form.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 11:16pm on 27/05/2007
Thanks, love :)
 
posted by [identity profile] redorchard13.livejournal.com at 02:10am on 27/05/2007
*lovebubbles*

thank you, that made me happy.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 11:30pm on 27/05/2007
I'm glad, thanks :)
 
posted by [identity profile] torn-eledhwen.livejournal.com at 02:49am on 27/05/2007
Oh, that's so sad and sweet and right.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 11:39pm on 27/05/2007
Thank you :)
 
posted by [identity profile] pseudoblu.livejournal.com at 03:24am on 27/05/2007
Awww. You made me sniffle.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 11:39pm on 27/05/2007
Good :)
 
posted by [identity profile] pktaxwench.livejournal.com at 03:28am on 27/05/2007
*cries*

I loved it. Thank you.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 06:05pm on 29/05/2007
Thanks! :)
 
posted by [identity profile] hannahrorlove.livejournal.com at 03:39am on 27/05/2007
Sweet and atmospheric without being overdone - a lovely way to make peace with some things.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 11:40pm on 27/05/2007
Thanks!
 
posted by [identity profile] heatherlayne-n.livejournal.com at 03:47am on 27/05/2007
*Tear* Wonderful, wonderful.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 11:40pm on 27/05/2007
Thanks!
 
posted by [identity profile] hikari-cyhan.livejournal.com at 03:57am on 27/05/2007
Wonderful.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 11:40pm on 27/05/2007
Thanks :)
 
posted by [identity profile] hobbit-feet.livejournal.com at 04:49am on 27/05/2007
*is extremely choked up*

And this, I think, is exactly how it happened.

*makes small sad noises*
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 11:41pm on 27/05/2007
Awww, thank you~
 
posted by [identity profile] veronica-rich.livejournal.com at 05:49am on 27/05/2007
Awwwww. Fabulous! Both good men get a shot at doing such an important job.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 11:41pm on 27/05/2007
I don't think Jack would've liked it, really. Thanks!
 
posted by [identity profile] dragonmad.livejournal.com at 07:12am on 27/05/2007
Im good at squinting.
*G*

Im glad you came up with the idea of James being on the Dutchman. Must admit i had that idea and was wondering if people would pick up on it.

I must admit im not a big fan of Will/Liz, btu you did this very well (as always). Bravo!
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 11:42pm on 27/05/2007
I think James-on-the-Dutchman is going to become the new black of fandom :) Thanks!
 
posted by [identity profile] eken95.livejournal.com at 09:41am on 27/05/2007
There is a big lump in my throat as I write this, that was so beautiful and well done.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 11:42pm on 27/05/2007
Thank you :)
 
posted by [identity profile] berne.livejournal.com at 10:14am on 27/05/2007
Oh, that was beautiful. I really like the idea of James becoming a part of Will's crew.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 11:42pm on 27/05/2007
Me too. Thanks, love :)
 
posted by [identity profile] elessil.livejournal.com at 11:07am on 27/05/2007
Beautiful bit of after-fic!

JAMES NORRINGTON FOREVER!
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 11:42pm on 27/05/2007
Absofuckinglutely. Thanks!
 
posted by [identity profile] commodoresexual.livejournal.com at 12:34pm on 27/05/2007
Ah, me. Thank you, Dala, for starting us off right.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 11:43pm on 27/05/2007
Aww, thank you, Wren :)
 
posted by [identity profile] accio-yossarian.livejournal.com at 12:40pm on 27/05/2007
This was just positively wonderful, heartwarming and tender.

And I love you for letting James Norrington join the crew of the Flying Dutchman and even replace Will - that is how the canon should have worked, for sure.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 11:43pm on 27/05/2007
I like the idea a lot :) Thanks!
 
posted by [identity profile] viva-gloria.livejournal.com at 01:11pm on 27/05/2007
James'd make a glorious captain for the Dutchman. Dutiful and atoning and all. And at sea, too, because Jack's not the only one who wants to sail the seas forever.

Now Will and Liz can go off and be Normal together.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 11:44pm on 27/05/2007
Plus Jack would be totally crap at the job - he'd likely end up like Jones, and who wants to spoil that pretty face with tentacles? Thank you :)
 
posted by [identity profile] klear0bsession.livejournal.com at 06:44am on 28/05/2007
Ahh! You made me cry. I don't cry!

Beautiful. Beyond beautiful!
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 02:55pm on 28/05/2007
Thanks :)
 
posted by [identity profile] the-grynne.livejournal.com at 12:07pm on 28/05/2007
Oh, so perfect!
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 02:55pm on 28/05/2007
Thanks :)
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posted by [identity profile] gwynevere1.livejournal.com at 03:33pm on 30/05/2007
We're all in denial about James, aren't we?
I worship you for this. "Charon of the open seas" is perfect. I adore how James tries to give Will and Elizabeth their privacy while still wanting to show his affection for Elizabeth. I like that Elizabeth thanks James. Most of all, I love how you show that this situation wouldn't be *easy* for any of them--but it would be better than the alternative.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 01:54pm on 31/05/2007
We're all in denial about James, aren't we?

It really isn't just a river in Egypt - especially when you have canon chock-full of exceptions to natural laws :)

Thank you! Yeah, it's going to be tough from the end of AWE no matter which way you slice it, but these characters are tenacious and they'll make do with what they have.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 01:28am on 31/05/2007
Volunteering for the next stint? :) Thanks!
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posted by [identity profile] jenthegypsy.livejournal.com at 01:45pm on 01/06/2007
James... You've brought him back and given him a noble purpose. This way, when the Sparrow passes, who will be there to greet him? *loves*
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 04:45pm on 02/06/2007
Heh, thanks!
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