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posted by [personal profile] the_dala at 04:39pm on 22/07/2009 under
This scene should look familiar, guys. Spock certainly thinks so.


Title: Waiting at the Gate
'It comes as no surprise that Dr. McCoy accompanies the captain to the transporter room.' Or, Spock experiences the phenomenon commonly known as déjà vu.
Author: Dala
Pairing: Kirk/McCoy, implied Spock/Uhura
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: standard applies



Waiting at the Gate


It comes as no surprise that Dr. McCoy accompanies the captain to the transporter room even though he is not on the away team. Spock has often made note of his frequent visits to the bridge when there is no need for his professional expertise. Sometimes he comes with a question or comment which could easily have been addressed over the comm or in their off-duty hours; sometimes the captain calls him up to view a remarkable nebula or consult with Spock on scientific research (a task McCoy protests and yet he always arrives within a reasonable span of time). Even after these trivial matters have been settled he will often remain standing by the captain's chair for some time, sharing the occasional quip or observation but more often a silent presence at Kirk's side.

He is far from silent now, voice rising and falling in a rant about recent ground missions which have gone badly and the chances of this mission producing similar results. The doctor running on pessimism while the captain blithely disregards his concerns is likewise a familiar scene; however, Spock detects a subtle difference in their speech and behavior patterns. Whereas McCoy usually stands close to Kirk - much too close for polite Vulcan social interaction and verging on too close by human standards - today there is nearly a meter's space between their bodies. Even his gesticulating hands decline to breach this invisible barrier. Spock adjusts his phaser on his belt as he continues watching them, curious at this break with convention.

Finally Kirk cuts the doctor off with a roll of his eyes. "It's just a routine planetary survey, Bones. I'll be back in a few hours."

McCoy crosses his arms over his chest, huffing. "Yeah, in pieces."

"Good thing I've got you to put me back together again."

There is a vaguely interrogative lilt to Kirk's voice, which strikes Spock as unnecessary bordering on absurd. After all, care for the captain's health should be the CMO's first priority regardless of the personal regard he has witnessed between these two men. It's also the sort of mildly suggestive comment Kirk frequently pairs with a wink or a hand on McCoy's shoulder. The fact that such gestures are absent seems significant to Spock. Even for a human Kirk is unusually tactile, and there is no one he touches more often than the doctor. In lieu of physical contact his gaze lingers on McCoy's face as if he is searching for something. The doctor looks away first.

If Spock were to speculate, he would say that perhaps they've quarreled on a level beyond their usual disagreements. He is of course no expert on human behavior; Nyota would no doubt have a better chance at correctly interpreting their body language. But she remained on the bridge to monitor their transmissions from the planet's surface, bidding them luck with a light brush of her fingertips on the back of Spock's hand.

Kirk joins him on the transporter pad with an quick grin, betraying no further unease. Out of the corner of his eye Spock watches McCoy's scowl deepen as the captain greets the three other members of the team. His hands clench into fists and he rocks on the balls of his feet as though trying to decide whether to move forward.

"Damn it," he mutters at last with a small, angry shake of his head. Crossing the short distance to the landing pad in long strides, he seizes the captain by his uniform tunic and kisses him.

Though Kirk is startled, Spock can see that this is no first kiss. There is no hesitation from either party, no delicate negotiation of territory: Kirk's lips part at once and he responds with evident passion. McCoy presses their bodies together so tightly that the captain is bent back in his embrace, spine curving gracefully. Kirk's right hand reaches up to twine in McCoy's hair while the other arm wraps around his waist. True to form even when he is caught off-guard, his fingers slip under the hem of the doctor's shirt to stroke bare skin.

A rustle of fabric to his right must be young Ensign Riley shifting in embarrassment as the kiss stretches long past the point of propriety, even propriety such as James T. Kirk understands it. From the operating console, Mr. Scott gives voice to quite another reaction with a whistle - a wolf whistle, if Spock recalls the colloquialism correctly (never mind that he has listened to recordings of canis lupis and their vocalizations sound nothing like the engineer's piercing blast of enthusiasm).

Just as it was McCoy who first reached out, it is McCoy who pulls back. The captain's grip stalls his retreat even as color creeps up his neck, past his wet lips. They stand still for a moment, foreheads just touching as they trade shallow breaths.

Kirk's smile is wide and pleased. If he'd been asking an unspoken question as Spock earlier postulated, he seems to have received his answer. He brings one hand up to cradle McCoy's jaw, an oddly tender gesture more intimate than the clash of tongues and teeth. McCoy apparently feels the same, for he flushes deeper and takes a step back. Kirk presses a shorter, softer kiss to his mouth before letting go.

McCoy ignores Scott's chortling as he stalks off the transporter pad, raking his disheveled hair back and muttering to himself about damn fool captains and hostile alien plantlife. Kirk is still beaming dazedly as he settles back into place. Spock looks straight ahead before the captain becomes aware of his interest. McCoy meets his eyes with an air of defiance, clearly daring him to comment on the inappropriate display.

"Captain," says Spock in a low voice which is nevertheless meant to carry, "shall I inform Lieutenant Uhura that her attempts at - what is the phrase - 'setting up' the doctor with attractive humanoid females -"

"Are futile, yes." He speaks out of the side of his mouth, blue eyes framed by creases that will one day turn into laugh lines. McCoy bites his lip but holds Kirk's gaze as the captain murmurs the command to energize and the world dissolves around them. Spock makes an impulsive decision against telling Nyota that the doctor is taken, not out of reluctance to bring an end to her pet project but because he thinks it might be more satisfying to watch her find out for herself.

She is waiting beside McCoy upon their return; and Spock concludes that his judgment was sound.
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posted by [identity profile] sangueuk.livejournal.com at 09:35pm on 22/07/2009
They are so in love. God. *wibbles*

Did I mention I love you and I want to have your writing's babies?
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 05:00pm on 23/07/2009
Aw, thank you! :)
 
posted by [identity profile] karadin.livejournal.com at 09:37pm on 22/07/2009
Ahah, win win, love this from Spock's POV.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 05:01pm on 23/07/2009
Thanks! :)
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posted by [personal profile] florahart at 09:45pm on 22/07/2009
♥ ♥ ♥

The wolf whistle line made me have to make unfortunate expressions and half-snorts to avoid cackling aloud and drawing attention.

Also, oh YES let her find out for herself. --now I want the scene where she finds out and realizes he knew and he's all "I had assumed you knew but, out of respect for their intimacy, did not discuss."

Also, mmmmmmmmmmmmnghhhh at the sudden kissin's and jaw touchin's. &hearts:
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 05:02pm on 23/07/2009
::grins:: Thanks! I made myself giggle over the wolf whistle line.

I think that scene might be where Spock learns about this thing we call "sulking."
 
posted by [identity profile] veronica-rich.livejournal.com at 09:48pm on 22/07/2009
Ha, I love it! I guess this would qualify as a secret about McCoy, just as Uhura's first name from Spock's lips, eh? (Which always struck me as funny, because I could totally see even in the middle of a crisis, Jim Kirk taking 20 seconds to take advantage of his new rank to look up Uhura's first name - and birthday.)
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 05:03pm on 23/07/2009
Of course he could, but he'd rather charm her into telling him. And thanks :)
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posted by [personal profile] andrealyn at 09:52pm on 22/07/2009
Mmmmngh, yes. Also, RILEY! I believe that anything with Riley in it immediately makes it that much better. Also, that was a smoking hot kiss that you wrote. Loooove it!
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 05:03pm on 23/07/2009
Gracias :) I love that Trek comes complete with random minor characters.
 
posted by [identity profile] thistlerose.livejournal.com at 09:53pm on 22/07/2009
*whimper* Oh, this is so lovely. Great Spock POV, too.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 05:04pm on 23/07/2009
Thanks! :)
 
posted by [identity profile] chemikalien.livejournal.com at 09:54pm on 22/07/2009
This is why I ship them. Unf. ♥
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 06:11pm on 24/07/2009
Thank you! :)
 
posted by [identity profile] secretsolitaire.livejournal.com at 10:00pm on 22/07/2009
*swoons*
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 06:11pm on 24/07/2009
Thanks :)
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posted by [identity profile] meewunk.livejournal.com at 10:13pm on 22/07/2009
Eeee, yay. Loved it :)
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 06:12pm on 24/07/2009
Thanks!
 
posted by [identity profile] cedarrapidsgirl.livejournal.com at 10:24pm on 22/07/2009
I love it...Bones and Kirk are SOOOOO cute...*hugs them both*
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 06:12pm on 24/07/2009
:) Thanks!
 
posted by [identity profile] pollyrepeat.livejournal.com at 10:26pm on 22/07/2009
Like Kirk, I am beaming dazedly. ♥ Oh, boys.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 06:12pm on 24/07/2009
Thank you! :)
 
posted by [identity profile] youkiddinright.livejournal.com at 10:31pm on 22/07/2009
I really love how you turned this fic into something really interesting and special just by having a third person commenting the scene. Really, great job.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 06:13pm on 24/07/2009
Thank you! :)
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posted by [personal profile] siluria at 10:39pm on 22/07/2009
Love the POV in this, especially Spock keeping things from Uhura, and damn that kiss was hot!!!! :)
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 06:13pm on 24/07/2009
Thank you :)
 
posted by [identity profile] syredronning.livejournal.com at 10:42pm on 22/07/2009
Sweet! I loved how much their love showed through a simple PG act in front of other people (I love sexxing but this is almost hotter in my brain).
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 06:13pm on 24/07/2009
That was the goal :) Thank you!
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posted by [personal profile] lj_stowaway at 10:43pm on 22/07/2009
omg just look at them! Such boys. And Spock's thoughts on the matter are priceless. Wonderful, as always.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 06:14pm on 24/07/2009
Thank you, as always :)
 
posted by [identity profile] nikki4noo.livejournal.com at 10:44pm on 22/07/2009
Now that was great.

You made me wonder about the argument they must have had before hand that precipitated Bones wanting and trying to keep his distance but failing at it eventually.

The use of Spock as the narrator was clever and yes Scotty would so wolf whistle :D

Ahh Spock is so gonna be in the doghouse when Uhura finds out that he knew and she didn't.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 06:14pm on 24/07/2009
Oh yeah :) Thanks!
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 06:15pm on 24/07/2009
Thanks so much! :)
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posted by [identity profile] shighola.livejournal.com at 10:57pm on 22/07/2009
Oh I just love this! Any chance of a sequel?
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 06:15pm on 24/07/2009
I don't have anything planned at the moment, but you never know...Thanks! :)
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posted by [identity profile] izzyfics.livejournal.com at 11:09pm on 22/07/2009
Awww...

*melts at the sweetness*
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 06:15pm on 24/07/2009
Thanks :)
 
posted by [identity profile] ennyousai.livejournal.com at 11:18pm on 22/07/2009
Oh, Scotty wolf-whistling. He would. He so would.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 06:16pm on 24/07/2009
::nods:: He's totally that guy.
 
posted by [identity profile] anne-higgins.livejournal.com at 11:24pm on 22/07/2009
This was terrific! I loved Spock's analysis of the situation, and Bones finally giving in. Just great!
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 06:16pm on 24/07/2009
Thank you :)
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 06:16pm on 24/07/2009
I'm glad! Thank you :)
 
posted by [identity profile] celandineb.livejournal.com at 11:43pm on 22/07/2009
[livejournal.com profile] florahart said:

Also, oh YES let her find out for herself. --now I want the scene where she finds out and realizes he knew and he's all "I had assumed you knew but, out of respect for their intimacy, did not discuss."

This, yes, this needs to be written!

Lovely fic; I really enjoyed that it was Spock's POV, and that we don't have whatever went on before between Kirk and McCoy that caused both the unspoken tension and the kiss that resolved it. Mmm.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 06:17pm on 24/07/2009
Thank you! :)
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posted by [personal profile] tigriswolf at 11:52pm on 22/07/2009
This is AWESOME.
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 06:19pm on 24/07/2009
Thanks! :)
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 06:20pm on 24/07/2009
Thanks so much! :)
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