This was sooo good. Romantic, atmospheric, sexy...PERFECT. I could literally feel the heat and tension between Will and Elizabeth--seems like they might have to skip the reception! Also, loved this bit too: “I’m asleep!” Jack said immediately. “Deeply asleep. I might be dead. Carry on.” CLASSIC. I laughed out loud. I was sitting there thinking that Jack was probably enjoying all of the goings-on with a huge grin on his face, and he was! You do a very great job portraying the camraderie between Will and Jack, and I just love your Will all around. Great, great story!
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This was sooo good. Romantic, atmospheric, sexy...PERFECT. I could literally feel the heat and tension between Will and Elizabeth--seems like they might have to skip the reception! Also, loved this bit too: “I’m asleep!” Jack said immediately. “Deeply asleep. I might be dead. Carry on.” CLASSIC. I laughed out loud. I was sitting there thinking that Jack was probably enjoying all of the goings-on with a huge grin on his face, and he was! You do a very great job portraying the camraderie between Will and Jack, and I just love your Will all around. Great, great story!
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