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posted by [personal profile] the_dala at 12:43pm on 21/04/2004 under
Three more H/C drabbles for [livejournal.com profile] linaelyn's challenge, none of them strictly 100 words, two of them more than a bit over, but they're still only half a page or so. The first one is fluffy, the second two are dark and feature character death.



Burn


“I can’t begin to tell you how sorry I am, Will –”

“Really, it’s all right. Far from the worst burn I’ve ever had. You didn’t know that brazier had just been on the fire. Ahhh – careful.”

“I’m s–”

“Not again, James.”

“Mmmph.”

“Much better.”

“Do you want me to fetch more water?”

“If you really want to lessen the sting...you could use your mouth...”

“That seems – well, I suppose –”

“Oh – oh yes, that feels nice. Very soothing...mmm, lower...”

“This is not a good idea.”

“Just...roll in that direction instead.”

“You know – holy God, Will – one of these days, we really are going to have to make it to your room.”



Absolution


Jack kicked the door off its hinges without even checking the lock. His pistol immediately trained on the man standing by the window in the commodore's office.

Gillette turned to him, his eyes red-rimmed and his hair mussed like he’d been running his hands through it.

“Do it,” he said hoarsely, the pleading note in his voice wrenching fresh anguish from the bleeding, aching flesh of Jack’s heart, which was not so black as he’d once thought. Not tonight, and not for these three years past.

“Wasn’t your fault, lad,” he said, coating his tone with the same clover-honey softness he’d often used in the late hours of the night, rocking James back from dreams of burning sails and Jack himself swinging in the breeze. James – James –

The young lieutenant shook his head wildly. “It was!” he cried, stalking forward. “It was – I fell, and I was in the water, and I couldn’t get back up the hull – couldn’t help – couldn’t save him...” With trembling fingers he gripped Jack’s hand, pressing the cold steel muzzle into the hollow of his throat. “You came here to kill me, Sparrow, because I let him die. So bloody do it!”

Jack pried himself loose, eyes locked on watery blue. “Hush,” he said past the knot in his throat. “You didn’t let him die. Nobody ever let Jamie do anything. He went down defending his ship, an’ his men, and that’s all he would’ve asked –” His words broke abruptly, cleanly. Gillette fell against him as the pistol clattered on the floor. Jack clenched his hands in the blue wool overcoat, so familiar, and yet he knew he’d never mistake it for the one that belonged to James, the one that carried his scent, the one now lost to whatever madly daring captain had finally sunk the Dauntless, leaving behind a sobbing lieutenant and a pirate lost with no more north to guide him home.



Rescue


He rubs the salve into Will’s striped back. The boy flinches but doesn’t make a sound, holds to the silence he’s kept since they dragged him out of Maguire’s stinking brig. The only time he broke it was when they set fire to the pirate ship from the safety of the Pearl’s guns; he asked Jack if he could watch and then, staring at the wreckage, he said hollowly, “Elizabeth.” Her body went over the side a week before, or so the cook claimed before Jack ran him through.

Now Will turns his head to the side, looking at Jack out of one eye. His face is frighteningly blank. Jack lets his fingers soothe, gently stroking where the lash didn’t tear and strip, avoiding going too low; Will has more torn flesh than is visible, and Jack will do nothing to remind him.

Will murmurs something and Jack leans down to hear. “What was that, love?”

“Should have done something,” Will whispers, closing his eyes. “When they took us...when they took her away from me...”

Jack covers the boy’s hand with his own. “Shhh, William. There was nothing you could’ve done, not for any of it.” He pauses, waiting for Will to speak again, but he merely buries his face in the pillow.

When his wounds are tended, Jack gets up slowly, thinking Will is asleep. But a hand gropes for him.

“Don’t leave me alone?” Will lifts his head to blink up at him, his eyes still too dry and too empty. Jack settles against the head of the bed, sliding his legs carefully up beneath the covers. He draws the pillow onto his lap and Will follows it. He is asleep almost immediately, while Jack strokes his hair and waits for the horrors to wake him, grateful that Will is going to let him be there to suffer them as well.
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There are 8 comments on this entry. (Reply.)
 
posted by [identity profile] guede-mazaka.livejournal.com at 09:54am on 21/04/2004
Ow. Now I have to write funny to cheer myself up. And reread that first one a couple of times.

*ponders*

So...does this mean I've implanted the attraction of Will/James in your brain?
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posted by [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com at 10:01am on 21/04/2004
I have to write funny

Oh, yes, do!

So...does this mean I've implanted the attraction of Will/James in your brain?

*snicker* I suppose you can take partial credit.
 
posted by [identity profile] juniper200.livejournal.com at 10:49am on 21/04/2004
Mmmmph! I think I just have something in my eye...
 
posted by [identity profile] roadparty.livejournal.com at 11:26am on 21/04/2004
It's very hard to be happy at work while reading things that make me cry...
 
posted by [identity profile] saltyshakes.livejournal.com at 12:16pm on 21/04/2004
a pirate lost with no more north to guide him home

This line is lovely. James as the north star...it makes perfect poetic sense of the differences between these two men who love each other so well.
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posted by [identity profile] geekmama.livejournal.com at 10:31pm on 21/04/2004
All were up to your usual high standards, but the last two--well, I'm not a fan of angst, in general, but really, these were so beautifully done. Great work.
 
posted by [identity profile] xzombiexkittenx.livejournal.com at 01:37pm on 22/04/2004
Burn: That last line made that drabble. It was good but not Great, but that last line was wonderful. Wonder-fucking-ful. Mmmm

Absolution: Oh. *shudder* That was horrible, but wonderful all at the same time. I loved how Jack didn't check the lock. The premise of Jack and Gilette was excellent.

Rescue: I am dying to see this made into a long epic fic with lots of pretty angst and smut to come. Wonderful. yet I wasn't sad for Liz which made it better. Any more sad after Absolution would have killed me.

BTW- Thanks for your comment on CC pt 6.5. So glad you liked Davy, I was worried he was just annoying. I love the weird little bugger though.
 
posted by [identity profile] kho.livejournal.com at 12:24am on 03/11/2004
1) Hee hee, that was cute. Love dialogue only's.

2) the one now lost to whatever madly daring captain had finally sunk the Dauntless, leaving behind a sobbing lieutenant and a pirate lost with no more north to guide him home.

Okay, so like, why don't you just kill me, huh? Oh, this literally ripped a 'ouch' right out of my mouth. I did that "Guh" thing, because that line was fucking powerful!!!

3) His face is frighteningly blank.

So you see that in Jack too, huh? The stoicism. The 'will not let you see me hurt.' I got a couple of people suggesting that in my "Goodnight Sweet Prince" fic where Gibbs dies that Jack wouldn't be stoic about it, and I was starting to think maybe I was the only one that saw that in him.

This was lovely, all three of them. The second one broke my ever lovin' heart though. Guh.

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